Life Without You

seberry on Mar 7, 2010

This is a poem I wrote for my granddad, I hope you enjoy it, please read and let me now what you think and what I could improve thanks =)

Life without you.

you were who i looked up to,

your footsteps are the ones i want to walk through,

you were as bright as the sun,

whenever i was with you, it was always fun,

you were my inspiration,

you are it’s definition

it’s hard to live without you,

you were who i looked up to.

Grandad i love you,

here will always be a space in my heart for you.

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seberry on Jul 4, 2010
Hey i am the writer of this peom, i was just hoping people ould read it and let me no what you think, thanks
seberry on Jul 4, 2010
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Hi there!