A poem of losing… Most of us feel it.
If only you could buy the needs and wants of the ambition.
If only you can build a compound of your own and have your love of battalion.

People come and go…
Some stay for a while
Others just to file
Few to mingle and mile

Seems ordinary, it is man’s line
To encounter is a stranger’s dine
To experience is a natural vine
And to leave is another fulfilling sign

But, when you learn to love
This new company in departure’s knob
You’ll wish not to lose the memories of the past
Projecting the future to stay as present and last

Whatever feeling it may be…
A sweet desire, a sincere devotion
Unconditional friendship or an everlasting premonition
The thought is you’ll regret this love of affection

If only you could buy the needs and wants of the ambition.
If only you can build a compound of your own and have your love of battalion.
Forever, you’ll be secured, confident and competent
To have their presence
Until the end of life, it has no permanent!

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Comments (10)
  • Mr Ghaz on Mar 29, 2009

    Great work! That was lovely poem. Thanx for sharing

  • Luffy12 on Mar 29, 2009

    nice poem

  • rutherfranc on Mar 29, 2009

    so sad.. somber emotion really evident.. lovely piece

  • Jo Oliver on Mar 29, 2009

    Very emotional read

  • papaleng on Mar 30, 2009

    great work and powerful one, Kabayan.

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 30, 2009

    Beautiful poem, lovely use of language

  • Alicia Wind on Mar 31, 2009

    a good one…

  • CutestPrincess on Apr 2, 2009

    Love your thoughts and absolutely resonate with them.

  • spiritwalker on Apr 4, 2009

    You are a good writer…I look forward to reading more of your work.

  • suzan mehmet on Apr 7, 2009

    Words said are words felt. You have opened the mind for the reader on this one! Wonderful verse and so well expressed!

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