Sugar coated criticism.

With every “i love you baby” dipped in bourbon and briskly

tossed generally my way

I say stop lifitng me down

Discard the demeaning and sugar coated deception and try to simply

throw them away

When you insult my mind with see through lies

and verbal abuse

You try to lift me down

Building me up with thinkly cloaked digs isnt new

and unbeknownst to you

You treat me as if I am your inflatable clown

Try really building me up once

I am smarter than you think

I am far from a dunce

so stop lifting me down

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