Is their any value in darkness?

What a great day

It must have been

When light

First appeared

In the universe,

Thank You

So much

For

Ever

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Comments (7)
  • KittyK on Jun 19, 2011

    Very good. I like both the light and also the darkness.

  • Martin Kloess on Jun 19, 2011

    I would have left the ever off, try it

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 19, 2011

    Good share

  • Dreamy777 on Jun 19, 2011

    very nice poem

  • isloooboy on Jun 19, 2011

    than you so much for sharing nice work

  • neopisiva on Jun 20, 2011

    Enlightment!:)

  • kimberlyds on Jun 24, 2011

    Hmm – right! that’s another thing we take for granted

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