Light Forbidden

Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 13, 2009

Tags: abortion, feticide, foeticide, Poetry, protest

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It is a haiku protesting against feticide.

The hand went in

And the helpless future met

A bloody end.

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Comments (17)

Darla Cooke on Nov 13, 2009
Interesting haiku.
K.Reshma on Nov 13, 2009
Very nice
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 13, 2009
EXTREMELY GOOD

THATS WHY I AM SO CAREFUL

WHERE I PUT MY HAND

LEST ADRENALINE

SIMPLY FLOWS

WHEN I STAND

LOVELY

JUST lovely
Ruby Hawk on Nov 13, 2009
Well said,
Brenda Nelson on Nov 13, 2009
Its easy to say things against abortions, but unless women have support and alternatives they will happen, at least if they are legal there is less risk of death to the woman, who obviously didnt want to be pregnant in the first place.
Will Gray on Nov 14, 2009
Sucint and thought provokingQ\!
Ramalingam on Nov 14, 2009
Sharp.
Sukhdarshan on Nov 14, 2009
I don\’t know anything about Haiku…but I like its rhythm….It is_was really thought provoking issue…thanks…all the best..
wonder on Nov 14, 2009
A thought provoking one,a matter of constant debate.
Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 16, 2009
dats an excellent haiku formed..good 1.
Goodselfme on Nov 16, 2009
You made your point distinctly with this haiku
deep blue on Nov 17, 2009
So true.
Jane Jane on Nov 22, 2009
Well said.
PhoenixRox on Dec 16, 2009
A very important message, bang on target. Great job!
Marie Antoinette on Dec 18, 2009
Oh, so sad. So well done!
S A JOHNSON on Dec 23, 2009
I’m with B Nelson but I think that this is still well written.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Feb 16, 2010
Short,tragic, and unfortunately a reality of today. Awesome piece.

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