Lightning Bug (Haiku Du Jour)

Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 6, 2010

Tags: 5-7-5, Haiku, passion, Poetry, Quiet storm, self-control, Thunder

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My heart is lightning in a jar.

This shyness subdues

The power of tumult thunder

And a poet’s heart

©2010 J. K. Bradford

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strategy03 on Nov 6, 2010
I read your impressive article and thanking you for this
lapasan on Nov 6, 2010
good post.
PSingh1990 on Nov 6, 2010
Nice Share.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 7, 2010
Thanks to you Lapasan, PSingh and Strategy!
awesome11 on Nov 7, 2010
great share! thanks!
pattiann on Nov 7, 2010
Excellent haiku, my favorite type of poetry.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 7, 2010
Thank you PattiAnn!

Thank you also Awesome11 !
Phoenix Montoya on Nov 7, 2010
A poet’s heart is something indeed. Liked it, short and thought provoking.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 7, 2010
Well done,
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 7, 2010
Thanks Phoenix M. and Many Thanks Ruby!
Tulan on Nov 7, 2010
very impressive.
LadyElena on Nov 7, 2010
Lovely – but the photo wouldn’t open on my PC.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 7, 2010
Thanks Tulan and Elena.

Elena FYI, it was a video for Andrea Bocelli\’s version of Con Te Partiro; one of my favorite operatic songs.
Kaye TM on Nov 7, 2010
cool! loved it
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 7, 2010
Thanks KAYE
Anuradha Ramkumar on Nov 10, 2010
Very well done.
LewSethics on Nov 10, 2010
Nicely done, good video.
Adrn0919 on Nov 14, 2010
How nice. That is so sweet of a way to describe you. Thanks.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 15, 2010
Thank you for your comments Anuradha, LewSethics, and Adrian

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