A Haiku.

lights in the city

in my hut

a candle lit

(Image Courtesy: www.phaaustralia.com.au)

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  • PARAM on Aug 6, 2010

    Nice Share.

  • wonder on Aug 7, 2010

    This shows me light. There is warmth.

  • krrymarie on Aug 7, 2010

    lovely haiku!

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Aug 7, 2010

    priyanka this is absolutely wonderful. i agree with wonder that the first thing i felt was warmth. it’s as if you have made everyone feel nice and warm with your small light. :) beautiful work. :)

  • Goodselfme on Aug 7, 2010

    You bring such depth to you prose.thank you for a lovely piece.

  • Great Idea on Aug 7, 2010

    Once you begin to move beyond basic background information, you begin to realize that there’s more to Lights (Haiku) than you may have first thought.

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