Born of a "10 word" contest, based on several beautifully rugged places in western North Dakota…

Cool breeze in my face,
elbows lean on wood rail,
a hardwood
deck floor
beneath bare feet,
warm, sensuously smooth
for skin rubbed rough
in dampened boots
and wool socks caked
with coal dust.

Work worries left behind
in quiet contemplation,

as wild willows sweep low
over waves of Lignite Creek,

reaching to kiss water
as boats of foam swirl by.

Across rustling prairie,
a coyote’s lonely cry
splits the muted night.

I turn and slip away
through sliding doors,
stop to stir a dying fire,
then wonder once again
at twists of circumstance  
that brought me here
to this dirty work,
to this cherished home,
to this stark and lonely place
of meadowlark voices
and sculptured bluffs
that stand beneath
a painted canvas sky.

 

Casey Mack (2007)

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  • Kate Smedley on Apr 28, 2010

    Well, I don’t know about the contest Casey but the imagery in this poem carries me with it to that ‘painted canvas sky’. Lovely work.

  • stryka66 on Apr 28, 2010

    This is wonderful writing, Casey

  • Jonie on Apr 29, 2010

    You took me there – great!

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 29, 2010

    Wonderful post.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Sep 20, 2010

    So beautiful, as always. Your vivid imagery always takes the reader to the place about which you are writing. Great job!

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