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Like a River (Haiku)

Martin Kloess on Feb 9, 2012
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Haiku – reflection.

Just like a river
His life had become seasoned
By all he passed through

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  • KimberlyMartin on Feb 9, 2012

    Very philosophical. Inspiring.

  • A Bromley on Feb 9, 2012

    Wonderful and inspiring. I wrote a poem awhile back of a similar nature while contemplating life as I walked along the river’s wind one fall day. It inspired us in a similar fashion but you ave said it all so very poignantly in very few word. This haiku us one of your very best. Keep sharing.

  • A Bromley on Feb 9, 2012

    I’ll find my poem and post it. It is titled LIFE IS LIKE A RIVER and is one of the poems I have included in my book THOUGHTS OF A GREEN MOUNTAIN GIRL…not yet published. Again, this is a marvelous haiku. I enjoy your work, especially your haiku.

  • tankermone on Feb 9, 2012

    Such wonderful metaphor – love it!

  • erwinkennythomas on Feb 9, 2012

    no trail

  • Ryanxxx on Feb 9, 2012

    very inspiring.

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  • dwisuka on Feb 10, 2012

    our life flows like a river

  • indianwriting on Feb 10, 2012

    omg!!! that sounds sooo old :)

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 10, 2012

    but still he never knew who he was

  • sheilanewton on Feb 10, 2012

    Strange – I’ve published a poem on Triond called ‘Like Rivers…’ – conincidence or a melding of minds? Aaaaahhhhh!

  • Nidhi Rai on Feb 11, 2012

    Wonderful.

  • Dora77 on Feb 11, 2012

    liked it!

  • avissado on Feb 11, 2012

    BASS- Brilliant, Awesome,Superb,Superlative. You are my haiku hero:)

  • lauralu on Feb 11, 2012

    Deep as a river
    deep calls to deep

  • bagus69 on Feb 11, 2012

    very nice..

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Feb 12, 2012

    Deep meaning:)

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