If I were God for a day, I’d love her like no other.

Every little thing you do creates a spark of inspiration

that makes my feelings align with truth

What I mean to say is without you my words would have no flow

they wouldn’t paint vivid images on mental canvases

the texture you provide is a beautiful expression of explicit content,

but you do it in such a way that parental advisory is unnecessary

you make love wholeheartedly the way the Bible describes

when your body is not your own but belongs to the one willing to die for you.

It’s why I know you better than you know yourself.

Why we can’t sleep when we’re too far apart

 why when you’re upset you’re compelled to forgive me.

You can’t understand my spirit without knowing my truth

You showed me your ugly side and I was amazed by your beauty

Saw what made you attractive and fell in love with the depth in your eyes

My flow is eternal and like an ancient river

I bend towards your peaceful side, a meadow with still waters

I want to lie down beside you. I find the passages of the Bible

to be a valuable lesson because I see God in all that I do

I see how His word is everlasting and mine is just beginning

If He and I were to trade places, I still wouldn’t know where

I end and He begins

I would be supreme trying to make Him do more than He could imagine

I would become less if it meant Him loving me more,

and this My Dear is what I feel when I think about you

The initial depth of my prose is that I would trade my life for an eternity with you

and this is only the beginning

 I am that I am so that I might love you like no other

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Comments (8)
  • ashan1614 on Aug 2, 2011

    Beautiful! You describe a love that is godly and spiritual… there are few who know how to love this way.

  • Dennis N OBrien on Aug 2, 2011

    Well written as usual – thanks.

  • Karen Gross on Aug 2, 2011

    What an utterly beautiful expression of love! “The man and his wife were both naked, and they were not ashamed.”

  • Jenilia12 on Aug 2, 2011

    Beautiful! The story of the love will for ever remain mind blowing!..

  • LoveDoctor on Aug 3, 2011

    Beautiful. I agree with Ashan

  • Goodselfme on Aug 3, 2011

    This is the epitome of unconditional love in prose form. So well done that it lingers in the mind for a long time. Thank you for sharing this delight with me.

  • Christine Ramsay on Aug 3, 2011

    This is such a beautiful and inspiring post.

  • erwinkennythomas on Aug 27, 2011

    v. good post!

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