Some folks write more comments, than the content .There should be some limitation. We should not steal, the lime light Or Should we?


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Lime light

When I wrote some small comments,

Guys and girls did lament,

U takes the lime and light away.

Some where the trend is now on.

Some commentators are worse,

Than spectators,

They write more than the poet.

What of lime light,

They take the lemon away.

 

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  • rajeev bhargava on Mar 20, 2009

    nice photographs and a well written poem. i liked it alot.

  • rutherfranc on Mar 20, 2009

    nice observation LH.. I think this proves you are really reading not just the pieces but the comments as well..

  • edward on Mar 21, 2009

    thanks…m happy ur reading everything…

  • George W Whitehead on Mar 21, 2009

    It’s OK if the comments are constructive, LH.

  • Suppee XX on Mar 21, 2009

    As long as the comments are relevant to the read article, its great, and probably appreciated. Is there a cetain etiquette with these things? – if a lemonis the zest, its the shame that a commentator should intentionally try to take that away..

  • Darla Cooke on Mar 21, 2009

    I like the poem and the pics with it. They go very well together.

  • nesita on Mar 21, 2009

    Constructive criticism is always welcome.

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