Haven’t written poetry in a few weeks..

She’s a fan of gravity, he’s a fan of space

and all of her’s he tried to waste

he’ll tell you he’s another St. Stephen

she know’s him better, he’s headed toward treason

maybe it means nothing

maybe it means nothing

maybe it means everything you choose not to see

They are not together here, four in between

city so quiet, tranquilized it seems

I’ll teach her to be bold, with her hands to guide her

feet slip too fleetingly, I’ll stand beside her

maybe it means nothing

maybe it means nothing

maybe it means everything you choose to be

Run, run, gather the world inside

feel, speak, after all, no way to hide

stars dancing on a carpet in the sky for you

he can’t hurt you, you know the truth

maybe it means nothing

maybe it means nothing

maybe it means everything, you’re safe in the lime tree

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  • atta muhammad on Feb 27, 2011

    good one

  • Bo.Jack Russo on Feb 27, 2011

    Interesting. I don’t get it, but interesting all the same.

  • UncleSammy on Feb 27, 2011

    Nice share

  • trruk1 on Feb 27, 2011

    Maybe it means nothing. But maybe…

  • trruk1 on Feb 27, 2011

    Maybe it means nothing. But maybe…

  • katarina giselle on Feb 27, 2011

    ha its ok bojack..theres a ton of symbolism..maybe sometime i’ll write about it

  • quiet voice on Feb 27, 2011

    Very intriguing poem. Let it stand on its own, don’t explain. Thank you.

  • Thespeakman on Feb 27, 2011

    Never explain – keep them guessing – thank you

  • papaleng on Feb 28, 2011

    hard to digest what you meant, thanks you said that the words have symbolism engraved on it.

  • TrevorS on Feb 28, 2011

    I don’t get poetry, but I am trying, so please keep on writing. I am hoping for a light-bulb moment.

  • hfj on Mar 2, 2011

    Nice poem that could be a song. Just remember that “oak tree’s” grow way higher than “lime tree’s”…..haha Well done.

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