Limerick – The Day Could Have Been Better.

The Day Could Have Been Better – Picture Courtesy Of funmunch.com

To lose his wheels at this substantial height,

Really must have been a phenomenal fright,

The wheels now departed,

The stunt only just started,

This day really wasn’t going alright!

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  • jennyreeve on Aug 2, 2012

    Haha, now that is funny!

  • Jswana on Aug 2, 2012

    Is he alright. I mean he looks extremely airborne. But this is so original. These kinds of sports scare me. LOL. :)

  • Stessily on Aug 2, 2012

    Chris, Yes, that’s definitely a day gone awry.
    Appreciatively, Stessily

  • lauralu on Aug 2, 2012

    Great limerick

  • stevetheblogger on Aug 2, 2012

    There is a four letter word that comes to mind Oh ****
    Great one
    Best wishes
    Steve

  • tankermone on Aug 2, 2012

    Airborne Trooper gonna eat a little dirt,
    Airborne Trooper gonna get a little hurt,
    Great one Chris, Look ma, no wheels, no cushions, no teeth!

    Hey, is that fork supposed to be stuck in my leg?

  • smokychristine on Aug 3, 2012

    What an amazing picture. The limerick is perfect.

  • elee on Aug 3, 2012

    very good rite up thanks: elee

  • Derdriu on Aug 3, 2012

    Chris, Wow, that’s a brand never to buy or drive!
    Respectfully, and with many thanks for the very poignantly funny limerick and the amazing picture, Derdriu

  • Lady Sunshine on Aug 4, 2012

    LOL.

  • Moses Ingram on Aug 4, 2012

    Hope he\\\’s okay.

  • Marquis de Joker on Aug 6, 2012

    Look ma no… uh oh

  • Shawn Lyrics on Aug 9, 2012

    Definently could have been better! lol

  • Eiddwen on Aug 13, 2012

    I love these Limmericks of yours;you are now inspiring me to create one.
    Eddy.

  • lauralu on Aug 15, 2012

    This was really well written, hope all is well

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