Limerick – The Station.

The Station – Picture Courtesy Of Google Images

The lady on the platform was stunning,

The train he was on was still running,

And with that long look,

Those moments were took,

Too late now, that wall is a coming!

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  • lauralu on Jul 30, 2012

    Really good funny limerick

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Jul 30, 2012

    Clever and funny Limerick! Thanks:)

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Jul 30, 2012

    Cute!

  • Hani Zaidi on Jul 30, 2012

    This happens in my city because of some lawn adverts

  • smokychristine on Jul 30, 2012

    How do you do it, Chris? Another good one.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jul 30, 2012

    Typical guy. LOL.

  • sabanawaz on Jul 31, 2012

    superb writing

  • Marquis de Joker on Jul 31, 2012

    She’s a brick… (keyword) house, or maybe this guy said ouch heh heh

  • Jswana on Jul 31, 2012

    ha,ha,ha. Too cute and funny. I’m sure this happens in many big cities but a man saw a woman in a New York (I believe) station and the look was brief but to him, it held his future. He went back to that station over and over until he found her. They got married! :) I love life!

  • Moses Ingram on Aug 4, 2012

    Funny!

  • lauralu on Aug 6, 2012

    (:

  • Derdriu on Dec 5, 2012

    Chris, He got slammed: O-u-c-h!
    Respectfully, and with many thanks for sharing, Derdriu

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