A Girl and Her Dog

Darla Smith on Mar 20, 2009

Tags: black dog, girl, Limerick, Oak tree, Playing Outside

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A limerick.

There once was a girl named Marie.

She liked to be outside and free

She had a black dog

They played by a log

Lying beneath a tall oak tree

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Comments (12)

Elegance on Mar 20, 2009
I love this! i dont know why. Maybe b/c its so simple yet informative. Short poems need to leave a lasting impression @ the end and this one did.
rajeev bhargava on Mar 20, 2009
i love this poem. simple and meaningful.
MLM on Mar 20, 2009
Really nice…
Joni Keith on Mar 20, 2009
Limericks are always fun when done correctly.
kate smedley on Mar 20, 2009
Funny! I enjoyed this.
Milton H Peebles III on Mar 20, 2009
OH YES!!! I like this!!
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Mar 20, 2009
Nice one, Darla.
vim3 on Mar 21, 2009
Simple and sweet:)
CutestPrincess on Mar 21, 2009
wonderful poem…
LOVELY HONEY on Mar 21, 2009
in times gone by ,
i do ot know ,
women always said

”LOVE ME LOVE MY DOg”

yes they did so,

but i still don’t know why.

can any one say so
why ?
Colleen Ranney on Mar 21, 2009
yes loves this style.
kns1992 on Mar 22, 2009
so cuteee!! =]

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