Let your hair down.

A wild, happy party girl from Spain,
Would love a good dance in the rain,
When her mother said, “You,
Come inside or you’ll catch flu!”
She replied, “Mother you’re just being a pain.”

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Comments (9)
  • Countrymom on Dec 8, 2008

    Great job! I love the picture!

  • Morgana on Dec 8, 2008

    How nice—–I love to dance too!!!

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 8, 2008

    Loved it.
    Christine

  • Lauren Axelrod on Dec 8, 2008

    One of a kind as always James. Well done

  • clay hurtubise on Dec 8, 2008

    Fun!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Bozsi Rose on Dec 8, 2008

    Very cute!

  • eddiego65 on Dec 9, 2008

    Very funny! Enjoyed it very much!

  • denus on Jan 9, 2009

    loved it mate, keep it up!

    cheers,
    to sharing articles!

  • Francois Hagnere on Feb 17, 2011

    Funny poem. Well done!

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