Whistling Boy

Darla Cooke on Jan 7, 2009

Tags: Boy, corn, Hides, Limerick, stalks, strolls, Whistles

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A whistling limerick.

The boy whistles as the walks

No one will listen when he talks

He strolls right along

Whistling his song

While he hides among the corn stalks

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Comments (7)

Westbrook on Jan 7, 2009
Puzzling…. I like.
AC Hamilton III on Jan 7, 2009
Nice. You left me hanging..I guess that’s suspense. (smile)
Mr Ghaz on Jan 7, 2009
Simple but nice. Good works!
Yovita Siswati on Jan 7, 2009
simple and puzzling, but sounds very good! I like it.
Jasin on Jan 8, 2009
I like the feeling I got from this one!
Alicia Wind on Jan 8, 2009
It feels like I was walking with him too while whistling…so free!
Michele Cameron Drew on Jan 12, 2009
Cute… and although it does kind of leave you hanging, I like it!

-M

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