Liquid Sky

Shirley Shuler on Apr 26, 2010

Tags: aboard, Dreams, liquid, rescue, sale, sanity, sky, tickets, worries

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Let your mind set sail…

Dreams in the sky

Tickets for sale

All aboard

Ready for take off

Hold on to your sanity

Leave your worries behind

Liquid sky to the rescue

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Comments (8)

Earth Mother on Apr 26, 2010
Liquid Sky…Sounds like a Yummy drink!
Lady Sunshine on Apr 26, 2010
For some reason, I’m thirsty.
Vikram Chhabra on Apr 26, 2010
I would love to purchase some tickets for this beverage!
VTech on Apr 26, 2010
Good Post
giftarist on Apr 26, 2010
Can I reserve one?
sara20 on Apr 27, 2010
Interesting post, just today i know more about it. Good subject selection for writing articles. Thanks for sharing this good one.

Sara
Stickinthemud on Apr 29, 2010
Hmmm. Interesting. Is there an end to that horizon, because if not, I may not be able to join you in such an illusion. lol.

I find the use of the sentence segments is a little distracting though. Even in surrealistic writing, I think your sentences should be well grounded in structure.

Overall, good job, though. Thanks for sharing.
ShadowPsychos on May 2, 2010
great write:)

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