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Listing Candlesmoke

Kip Spleen on Nov 30, 2009
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An abstraction on a smoking candlewick.

ectoplasmic expansion

streaming slivers

hurried haze

withering white

sudden scent

burnt burst

dense distraction

vanished vapors

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  • Rinkal Desai on Nov 30, 2009

    Wonderful poem ^_^

  • drelayaraja on Nov 30, 2009

    Great one…

  • AlmaG on Nov 30, 2009

    Your words made me see clearly how it all happened. Great poem :)

  • Themax on Nov 30, 2009

    really great poem,Thank you :)

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 30, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • wonder on Nov 30, 2009

    Quite different.

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