Listing Candlesmoke

Kris Snow on Nov 30, 2009

Tags: candlesmoke, poem, Poetry

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An abstraction on a smoking candlewick.

ectoplasmic expansion

streaming slivers

hurried haze

withering white

sudden scent

burnt burst

dense distraction

vanished vapors

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Rinkal Desai on Nov 30, 2009
Wonderful poem ^_^
drelayaraja on Nov 30, 2009
Great one…
AlmaG on Nov 30, 2009
Your words made me see clearly how it all happened. Great poem
Themax on Nov 30, 2009
really great poem,Thank you
Darla Smith on Nov 30, 2009
Interesting poem.
wonder on Nov 30, 2009
Quite different.

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