A poem.

The little black bag sat on the shelf

I grabbed the staff and asked for help

I need to know how much it costs

I have some money but not that much

They checked the price and it was just right

The little black bags coming out with me tonight

Out on the town and everywhere around

My little black bag that I just found.

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Comments (5)
  • Sheila M on Jun 15, 2009

    Cute poem

  • Atanacio on Jun 15, 2009

    I like your writing style clean and crisp

  • Tanya Wallace on Jun 16, 2009

    Nicely written and decribed poem.Catchy wording ,nicely done!

  • Sky Lumina on Jun 17, 2009

    lovely!

  • Starpisces on Sep 14, 2009

    When I read, I imagine you grabbing the bag very fast otherwise others may pick it earlier than you.. ha ha ha.. cute

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