My man sleeping. A simple pleasure I so treasure.


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A little boy sleeps
Here in my bed
Uttering incoherent words
Of dreams in his head

Looking so very cute
As he drifts in slumber
Breathing in and out
From the visions that plunder

I reach out to touch him
Stroking his head and face
Wanting to give him solace
And take him to a better place

Longing to soothe his soul
And comfort him gently
Holding my darling close
Cradling him so tenderly

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  • daffodil on Mar 24, 2011

    From the heart. Adorable. :)

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 24, 2011

    You remind me of watching my lirttle grandson sleeping. I feel exactly the same way. A lovely poem.

  • Atanacio on Mar 24, 2011

    I bet he wouldn’t be so cute if he was calling out another woman’s name huh? Just kidding LOL very nice write as usual Lady SunDried…. I mean Shine….

  • Starpisces on Mar 24, 2011

    lucky man, you are such a sweet, romantic and gentle lady.
    Photo taken by you with one hand while the other hand touching his head?
    So sweet poem.
    LOL at Atanacio’s comment. :)

  • thresiapaulose on Mar 24, 2011

    An interesting article. Thank you Sunshine. Please add me to your friends list.

  • Erin Miller on Mar 25, 2011

    That is such a sweet poem and such a sweet gesture. I was going “Awww” the whole way through. :)

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 26, 2011

    How nice and sweet.

  • Erin Miller on Mar 27, 2011

    I have been trying to comment on your picable works but that damn site is evil I swear. lol Anyway, your poetry is beautiful.

  • Shirley Shuler on Mar 27, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, such a sweet and lovely piece. I can feel your love for him through your words.

  • Sharif Ishnin on Mar 31, 2011

    That is how my kitty put me to sleep too. lol. Very sweet poem for a sweetheart.:)

  • CA Johnson on Mar 31, 2011

    Your poem was so beautiful. Watching a child sleep can be a peaceful thing especially if he or she were causing a lot of trouble or were playing for a long time.

  • leannehume on Apr 8, 2011

    Wow, this is just beautiful, great Poem

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