I wrote this poem about growing up in a little brown house that sat at the foot of the mountain. My sisters, my baby brother and I roamed the fields and woods free as the birds and bees. We grew up poor and times were hard but some memories are imprinted forever and grow sweeter with time.

That little brown house that used to be
is clear as a bell in my memory
set at the foot of the mountain slope
the stream ran through the pasture
to the valley below

Bushy peach trees and tall pecans
flowering apples and sweet juicy plums
the tallest straightest sycamore trees
branchy cottonwood with purple flowers
in our knotty rope swing we swung by the hour
Our junebugs the greenest you’ve ever seen

 high in the sky legs tied with string

The grave yard lay on top of the hill
stones old and weathered or no longer there
long abandoned by kith and kin
who themselves lay in some lonely grave
in new cemeteries out of the glade

We children solemnly visited there
bringing wild flowers in early spring
mountain green mosses in winters reign
We grieved for the dead especially the babes
in the cold bleak ground that over them lay

We played in the creek on hot summer days
made play houses in green leafy shade
jumped the ditches and climbed the trees
wild and free as birds and the bees
Times were hard in those days long ago
not enough food not enough clothes
throughout the winters we were cold

But summers were long and doubly sweet
across all the years and seas of time
they lay warm and gentle on my mind.

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  • Louise Hart on May 28, 2007

    This poem brings my own childhood to mind. Thanks for the memories. Please write more of this kind.

  • Patricia Williams on May 31, 2007

    I like this poem.It makes one think how fortunate some of us are.

  • Ed on Jun 1, 2007

    Thank you for drawing this picture for us, and for sharing your memory – so clear.

  • Marty on Aug 20, 2007

    A wonderful poem, I want my children to read it and understand how childhood used to be.

  • Liane Schmidt on Dec 21, 2007

    Dear Ruby,

    Love this poem! Paints such a beautiful picture.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 1, 2008

    Sorry I haven’t been by to say thank you earlier. I do thank you for your comments and interest.

  • PR Mace on Nov 16, 2008

    What memories you brought back. I am glad I am not the only one that tied a string to a junebugs legs and watched them fly.

  • goodselfme on Nov 24, 2008

    Ah the refreshment of memories. Well penned.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 21, 2009

    Pam and Goodself. I thank you. Those were the days.

  • Netty net on Oct 9, 2010

    I picture Little House On the Prairie.

  • Betty Carew on Jan 29, 2011

    Ruby thanks for taking me on this wonderful trip through your awesome words. I love when you said memories get sweeter with time and it is so true. Wonderful poem Ruby with such vivid words. Thank you for sharing this.

  • Moses Ingram on Jan 29, 2011

    This brings back memories. I’ surprised that I didn’t read it before, or maybe I did and just didn’t leave a comment. I like poetry.

  • jennyreeve on Apr 26, 2012

    Beautifully written and a wonderful poem.

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