A poem about an emo who needs to take a different look on life.

Cheer up little emo.
move away from the back of the class,
start talking to some people,
and time will surely pass.

Stop crying to your razor,
you never liked the pain,
put on a happy raincoat,
stop standing in the rain.

So why are you wearing make up?
mascara’s not for guys,
take of the pale white foundation,
and wash that off your eyes.

You know the emo phase is over?
it finished a few years ago,
your fringe is no longer cool,
start going with the flow.

So now little emo,
are you going to change?
Probably not because your world is crumbling,
gosh emos are strange.

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  • RobConfusingJohnathonMT on Jun 10, 2009

    Hilarious That is Great I Make Fun Of Emo Children As Well All In Good Humor Though But A Very Nice Funny Piece If I Do Say So Myself

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 10, 2009

    Fun piece. I just learned about EMO kids a couple months ago.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • abby on Jul 12, 2009

    hey i dont care if u dont like emo\’s or not but that poem is rude and mean…ur a jerk…i know a lot of emo\’s and they cut b\’cuz they dont have n/e one who cares about them and they r depressed and they have their reasons either their parents beat them or ppl make fun of them…and robconfusingjohnathanmt u need 2 shut up i cant beleive u make fun of emos that just makes them cut even more u jackass u probably like it cuz u like 2 c ppl in pain…thatz wat the emo thing is about their in pain and they need a way 2 get rid of it so they cut…i used 2 cut (only a few times) but i had my reasons so yall need 2 shut ur disgusting, preppy, bitch, ass, mouths up.

  • sam on Jul 13, 2009

    0.o. it was just a joke poem… It’s bout how i dont get if there in so much pain they go and cut themselves and cause more pain. Come on that seems silly doesn’t it? And yes there may be some people who are truly depressed and want to be left alone. but there put in the crowd with the try hard happy ones that only care about the fashion and the girls that now like them because they conform. Lighten up it was in no offence

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