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Little Phoenix

Lady Sunshine on Jan 17, 2010
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The art of the phoenix.

The brush of your wings
The sweet smile in your eyes
Little bird take flight

Pigtails flying
Satin and silk shimmering
Forever soaring

Golden feathers float
Caressing the clouds above
Evermore rising

Always rise little one
Out of the burning ashes
Soaring high above

Dancing desire
Unquenchable fire
Your eternal rebirth

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  • drelayaraja on Jan 17, 2010

    wonderful words… Nice share

  • ken bultman on Jan 17, 2010

    Pretty little piece about a Phoenix who mustn’ t fly too close to the sun but neither too close to the ground. I believe she willl strike the perfect balance. Besides that, she’s cute as a button.

  • bailieman on Jan 17, 2010

    Looks like she is ready to take off flying again.

  • Atanacio on Jan 17, 2010

    fantastic piece Sunshine :)

  • Sourav on Jan 17, 2010

    Well done.

  • giftarist on Jan 17, 2010

    Another well done piece milady. :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 17, 2010

    RISE FROM THE ASHES OF DEATH

    COME ALIVE AGAIN

    THATS WHAT IS ALL LIFE ABOUT
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    ITS LIKE LOOKING UP

    You’re up look
    Makes me look up
    Where in the white sky
    Full of snowy clouds
    Do you hide?
    I too shall want to
    Have a lovely ride
    On the clouds you say
    I should look upto
    Perhaps
    My youthful friend
    Come up to look up
    Suddenly at you too.

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 17, 2010

    Hi Lady Sunshine, Little Phoenix, what a lovely rebirth.

  • standingproud on Jan 18, 2010

    WOW Lady Sunshine
    stunningly beautifully done.
    out standing image too :X:

  • VTech on Jan 18, 2010

    nice sharing

  • papaleng on Jan 18, 2010

    great descriptive poem, It was so sweet, fly little phoenix, see the world.

  • AlmaG on Jan 18, 2010

    Beautiful as always LS :)

  • deep blue on Jan 19, 2010

    Well crafted poetry. Phoenixrox will be delighted with the lines.

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