Good poem Clay. I especially like the last two lines.

In darkness blind men see light,
So darkness can be acceptable all right,
To some everything appears dark,
To others it’s about stark,
The nudity of life,
Of passion,
Of ultramodern fascination.

What one can do nowadays?
In the dark,
No one can do it,
In broad daylight hark.

Let darkness prevail,
All day all night,
All that finally does actually prevail,
Is the mighty ones fight.

Nice one Clay….I like darker poetry!

Nice poem, well expressed. And I also love the Grim Ripper

Very poignant and well written poem, Clay. Well done.

Christine

Really enjoyed this piece, so deep.

Put this on a T-shirt and sell it to EMO Kids, they will love ya!

Its a great reaching poem, and I love the bunny in the illustration, that really adds “punch”.

I agree to others: a well-written poem. Cheers!

Wow, dark imagery and a compelling, thought provoking message, nice poem.

Good work on this one, Clay. I also like the last two lines. And love the Emo T-shirt idea!

I love it Clay it is so medieval. Good job again.

Very interesting piece

The picture is very cool. I love the flow of your poem. Nice job

another nice poem,,keep that pen rolling

very good combination of picture and the poetry.

I really like the poem and the picture. I also love the last two lines…Great job!

this is a very well written piece. great post Clay

Clay your dark side is coming out. Loved it.

I like this, seems different than your usual works, but nevertheless refreshing & beautiful. like the photo too…

nice poem, well expressed.

Nice work

nice one man!!!!

loved it, and thanks for your comments on my writing as well….
will definitely keep coming back.
tina

Very cool. I’ve been interested in the after life since I was 8. I’m going to read more of your poetry and other writings. 0;D

Creepy lines. Very true indeed. Zombies among us arent we?

creepy pic you got there..nice post:) love it:)

Nicely put..

I like the flow and truly powerful.