Okay- that was too the point and deep- nice write – God Bless – Princess

Powerful work.*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

This is a good PIECE.

Nice point.. I’m a peace loving person, but ironically.. I love guns hehe. I love sports firing.
Shalom!

great

Nice an ode to the pistol. Good poem Clay.

Scary and sad topic, but this is well done, having so much power through its simple infusion of feeling- and action-words associated with guns and suicide.

great work:) you got a very unique style in this post..:)

Well done. Nice work with the flow of words.

Wow I never realized a single word could define such poetic lines in the most critical detail. Was that the gun Dean Winchester used to kill the demon in Supernatural? Good work my friend.

Powerful stuff.

Wow – dark dude – really dark. That’s a beauty!

Texas

The loneliness and despiration in this man/person was punctuated by the fact you used one word per line – excellent.

Sad to say, that\’s the way it happens all to often. Sometimes life jut seems too much to bear but thankfully most of the time we can step aside and move on. You put your finger on the emotions.

Hello old friend! Sorry I haven\’t been responding much, I\’ve been busy. This is a great poem, very intense.

Dark and very deep in so few words ~ love it

Clay, great read on your visions.reallexpressive and clean.great write for sure my friend!always,Gary La Buda

Dark and Intense. Simple, clear images that leave you almost hearing the clap of the firing.

Jerry

Wow. love it. Strong! Emotional. Skilled. Awesome. great piece!

apt

one of the best suicide weapons

Great piece, though sombre. Suicide by Triond overpayment would be preferred! Fat chance of that happening …

Ah-ha, you were innoculated with anti-nanorobotics vaccine as young child uh? Oh dear, look at what you’re going to miss out on!

Great poem presentation. Hate guns, however if one needs to protect ones self.

Trigger – Escape? If that happens you will never know how the story ends.

Very good job. Single words on single lines came together and formed just the right picture in my mind. Astounding! Thanks for sharing

That was powerfully written. More to your dark side, I think.

Wow, wow, wow, my friend! You can make poem with one word each row..impressive..

That photo does not catch your eye then what will?

Impressive. One line stanzas all the way down, powerful enough to create deep emotion, and with a deep meaning. Suicide is one of the hardest topics to tackle and you did it quite well. Excellent work.

WOW!! This is one of those poems that I\’ve always like as well. I call this a cool sharp shooter..awesome, bro..keep these writings up.:)

Very nice, i liked it.. it is a good way to tell a story in few words and not lose the quality of the piece…