Loaned Images

Linda Lori on Nov 6, 2009

A poem about finding your heart in unchartered territory…..

Image by thisisbossi via Flickr

The very perception of your image
Brands my photographic field,
Where engraved impressions
Fail to ever yield.

The very thought of your taste
Hungers my mind for more,
And salivating brainwaves
Are impossible to ignore.

The very idea of your heat
Swelters my tactual sense,
While anticipatory touch
Makes me warmly tense.

The very suggestion of you
Staggers my stability,
And dizzying daydreams
Facilitate puerility.

The very end of this poem
Pleads for a time loan
For territory undiscovered
And desires I cannot postpone.

10
Liked it

Comments (13)

Zappy on Nov 6, 2009
Linda Lori
Dr. Zappy prescribes a reality for a day.
This poem nominated for an Oscar and the winner is… you!!!
shanthu on Nov 7, 2009
very good poetry
Themax on Nov 7, 2009
really unbelievable written with a very deep thought,Thanks for sharing:)
Papa Sparks on Nov 7, 2009
Very lovely and evocative
Darla Smith on Nov 7, 2009
Very good poem!
Sourav on Nov 7, 2009
Looking forward for more from you. You are a good writer.
Sunitha Stalin on Nov 10, 2009
very good one
craigz on Nov 12, 2009
Great little poem. Thanks.
Teves on Nov 15, 2009
Nice one…
cutedrishti8 on Nov 16, 2009
Great piece of work..
abhishek40914 on Nov 19, 2009
nice poem
drelayaraja on Nov 23, 2009
great image good poem.
writeme on Dec 4, 2009
I wholeheartedly agree with Sourav,and endorse all the great comments others have made here about your poems. Dont you ever terminate, we want you back…

Hi there!