Locked and Loaded.

Steel blue oceans gaze into mossy green
Locked and loaded
Silently I rage
We wrote an entire book my love before we even began a page.
In you’re beauty I am ruined..
Golden splendor
Branded with the very essence of who you are
Blazing star
You’ve ripped open my scar.
I lay alone at night beside you
Wishing you’re arms would once again hold me tight
Make this right
Our bodies entwined together
More beautiful then any starlight…
His silky thickness enters me teasing my core
Theres nothing that could stop me from screaming for more..
Steel blue oceans engulf mossy green
Locked and Loaded
Together we’ve exploded.

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 18, 2009

    Your explicit explanation
    Of the finale scene
    Coated in sugared cream
    It has just exploded
    In my dream
    What a lovely set of metaphors
    You chose
    Silky steel and deep core
    What an internally lovely
    Drenched booze,
    Which explodes like?
    A Molotov cocktail
    In the mind of two
    Fragile though rocking
    Two both dove tail
    The words are so juicy
    One cannot but share
    The love you express
    With such erotic care

  • Tanya Wallace on Oct 19, 2009

    Great poem ,so wonderfully worded

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