Consequences of love as it should.

eyes closed

unable to hold your world close enough

unable to determine where self ends and universe begins

forgiveness and love melting between one another

words become meaningless

soft gazes speak pages in a glance

comforted by the familiar rhythm of each other’s heart

lost in the gentle breezes of hope

overwhelmed knowing nothing greater

convinced that no other could possibly know this love

blissfully lost

not caring where body or mind have gone

denying signs

false whispers of affection

distance looks, concealing lies

passion of kisses not intended

what could be more lonely

holding her near, breathing her in

my heart melts into her

impossible to be closer

desiring none other

sadly, her heart has drifted

cruelly giving her body but never her soul

laying silently in her resentment

filled with bile, she looses herself among others

the illusion and pain of holding something which wasn’t really there

coveting heart and mind

not to revere but punish

true loneliness

 

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Ojos cerrados

No pudiendo sostener tu mundo lo suficientemente cerrado

No pudiendo determiner donde lo propio termina y el universo comienza

Perdón y amor derritiéndose entre uno y otro

Palabras convertirse en palabras sin sentido

Miradas suaves hablan paginas a la vista

Consolados por el ritmo familiar del corazón de cada uno

Perdidos en la suave briza de esperanza

Abrumado sabiendo que nada mas grande

Convencido de que no otro podría  posiblemente saber este amor

Extasiada perdida

No preocupándose donde  el cuerpo y alma se fueron

 

Signos negativos

Murmullos falsos de afecto

Miradas distantes, mentiras  escondidas

pasión de besos no intencionados

Que puede ser mas solitario

Sostenerla cerca, respirarla

Mi corazón se derrite en ella

Imposible de estar mas cerca

No deseando otra cosa

Tristemente , su corazón se fue

Cruelmente dando su cuerpo pero no su alma

Acostada silenciosamente en su resentimiento

Llena de bilis, ella se piede entre otros

La ilusión y dolor de sostener algo la cual no estaba allí

Codiciando corazón y mente

No venerar pero castigar

Soledad verdader

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Comments (13)
  • Christine Ramsay on May 22, 2010

    Unfortunately this happens to a lot of relationships. You have expressed the feelings so well.

    Christine

  • Tom Woodside on May 22, 2010

    this was wrote very well. thanks for the indulgence

  • Goodselfme on May 22, 2010

    WEll penned piece with depth of meaning well expressed.

  • LoveDoctor on May 22, 2010

    A beautiful and heartfelt poem. I love how you also translated it in Spanish. Your quote is very true. Those who are weak can’t find forgiveness in their hearts as opposed to the strong ones.

  • Joie Schmidt on May 22, 2010

    Beautiful and straight from the heart.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • XXElleXX on May 23, 2010

    A dreamily written piece that ensnares your heart :-) .. intoxicating stuff that celebrates one of the most beautiful human conditions .. and one of the most painful ~ loved this Domenico Cigliano :-)

  • papaleng on May 23, 2010

    the flow is good and you really expressed your heart in this one.

  • giftarist on May 23, 2010

    Thumbs up on this one. I find it intense.

  • Ruby Hawk on May 23, 2010

    Sad but it happens to often, wonderfully expressive.

  • sara20 on May 24, 2010

    Style your writing is good, you slaughter order method described in the article you have so much good information.
    Sara

  • Emma Green on May 28, 2010

    What a very heartfelt piece indeed.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jun 3, 2010

    Third attempt now
    Something happens to the comp
    when I want to convey comments
    I don’t know
    Whether you wrote the poem in English first and later translated into Spanish…

    But I know a girl from Madrid
    Who translated many of my poems to Spanish?
    She was very nice and nineteen
    Yahoo knocked off my account
    And
    I lost all her communication.

    None-the less
    Your words are heart rending
    A cry in the wilderness of time
    I wouldn’t have opened your page
    Had I not known Yalonda?

    I beseech thee write some more,
    Take your heart and soul apart
    And
    Then you shall see
    How many shall love thee
    So more that the rendition of your poetry
    Is heart warming?
    That’s something for sure.

    I wonder if ever you’ve read me at all…

  • Elma Sandoval on Dec 5, 2010

    oh wow… i felt it as i visualized your words.

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