Loneliness(haiku)

avissado on Feb 4, 2012

Tags: friends, Haiku, Japanese, lonely

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Haiku – Japanese poetry form with 17 syllables(5-7-5).

Friends all around me

Everywhere I go they surround-

Still I am lonely

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Comments (13)

Alsayed on Feb 4, 2012
I will quote this on Facebook as my favourite! It’s something that’s very true for me…
sheilanewton on Feb 4, 2012
Aw – how soulful
Aroosa Gloomy on Feb 5, 2012
sadness is beautiful.loneliness is tragical:)
aheed411 on Feb 5, 2012
Beautiful poem
Nidhi Rai on Feb 5, 2012
very nice.
Safa on Feb 5, 2012
touching!!!
girishpuri on Feb 6, 2012
i like it
LoveDoctor on Feb 6, 2012
It seems like her love tank is empty.
lucia anna on Feb 8, 2012
Beautiful poem
Marquis de Joker on Feb 8, 2012
Sad truth
Nidhi Rai on Feb 14, 2012
Amazing.
sheilanewton on Feb 23, 2012
Called in to enjoy this again. Thank you.
lauralu on Apr 21, 2012
nice and sad truth

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