Lonely is the Man without Love.

You are staring out the mountains
reflected in the lake with a look of hardness.
A musician man holding his guitar.
taking photos of your own face
in place of conversation.
Don’t worry man.
One day your band will grace the world wide web.
One day you will meet a woman
and your lonelinesses will grasp together.

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  • AlmaG on Nov 4, 2009

    Teves, may siopao ako… share tayo… smile ka na ^_^

  • ceegirl on Nov 4, 2009

    nice write

  • Jane Benitez on Nov 4, 2009

    Teves, I enjoyed the poem – nice work.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 4, 2009

    Very nice, good job.

  • ken bultman on Nov 4, 2009

    You could get a puppy.

  • speckledlily on Nov 4, 2009

    I know this article tells about you.

  • Maxthevir on Nov 4, 2009

    Love is not everything. Nice display of emotions.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 4, 2009

    To find someone to share your hopes and dreams and your life is wonderful.

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 4, 2009

    I don\’t believe in love..

  • martinpm on Nov 4, 2009

    Nice writing, liked it.

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 4, 2009

    You WILL end up with TRUE LOVE*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • mathurans on Nov 5, 2009

    Nice Poem, Fine Imagination

  • neet on Nov 5, 2009

    Gud one.

  • Shamanz on Nov 5, 2009

    ah i like this. Very creative!

  • Themax on Nov 5, 2009

    good job seet heat:)

  • Starpisces on Nov 5, 2009

    Lonely days will soon pass… be happy now…focus on music which you enjoy and let nature takes its course.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 5, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 21, 2009

    lonely is a man without love… nice line!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 23, 2009

    Teves, we all go through those moments of doubt, but speaking for myself I agree that if you have some one in your life that you’re in love with and they love you back, makes the struggles and doubts of whether you’re doing all you can to be your best at your goals doable……Being lonely sucks, and the reassurance of someone in your corner gets you thru the rough times when you feel sad and overwhelmed in your spirit. Forget the nay sayers and feel life and express your heart, and thru those bouts of emotionally lows…start playing with your guitar or write the stuff down. I’m sure it will be one of your masterpieces. That’s how I do it. My best stuff comes from allowing myself to feel those unpleasant moments.

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