A young girl watches others at play, desperate for them to notice her and invite her to join in, but she is a carer with her grandmother and no time for play.

She stands there, watching

in the wings. Her limbs long and gangly

Like a new born colt

Eyes so dark and wide

like those of a startled fawn

Hidden partly by the dense dark leaves of the bush

Almost willing the others to see her

Yet wishing to remain hidden

Wanting to play ball with them

But too nervous and shy to join in

Silently wanting to be part of the group

The other children, oblivious to their audience,

Play noisily in the shade,

splashing in the pool

Their endless chatter a stark contrast to this one.

Then, the harsh voice of the grandmother

Calls the girl to do her bidding

The moment is gone, the child turns away

Sadness etched on her gaunt face

No play, games are not for her

Her life lies in caring for the old woman

Fetching and carrying,

providing company.

Young caring for old,

This lonely old child

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  • swatilohani on Jun 18, 2009

    great

  • Michaela on Jun 19, 2009

    Smiter this piece of work truly hurt my heart-Thank God I didn’t know what was to take place I could have cried all the way through it. Touches the heart strings.

  • Smiter on Jun 19, 2009

    i was on holiday in Cyprus when I witnessed this event. It was really sad to see.

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