Poem is about how some days the day feels like it’s never going to end, your doing a lot it is just going slow.

                                                               Long Days

                                                        The days are long

                                                         and the hours drag on

                                                          that seem to last forver.

                                                           The clock ticks on

                                                           as if time is standing still

                                                           and the hands are not moving.

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  • Blade619 on Jan 20, 2011

    Your poems have a rather confusing layout. I can see why you’ve done it, however I feel they may read better without the jumps.

    Howevr, do what you want to do… write how you want to write… don’t let anyone stop you :) .

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