Poem is about how some days the day feels like it’s never going to end, your doing a lot it is just going slow.
These days are long
and the hours drag on
like rain falling
and the wind swaying.
Like wandering through
the days that seem
to last forever.
Your poems have a rather confusing layout. I can see why you’ve done it, however I feel they may read better without the jumps.
Howevr, do what you want to do… write how you want to write… don’t let anyone stop you 
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