Eclipse is the 3rd series in Twilight Saga:)

Everyday is perfect for the two of us
We walk together like it was our last
Even how busy she really was

She sends me sweet messages
I do the same to her before I rest
And our sleeps will be at their best

But now that I’m in a far away land
Time with her absence is hard to spend
This sadness I feel is hard to mend

It’s Edward in Eclipse, I just wish she knew
“I’ll be back so soon, you won’t have time to miss me. 
Look after my heart – I’ve left it with you.”

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  • Darla Cooke on Jul 11, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Jul 11, 2009

    Nice poem

  • Inna Tysoe on Jul 11, 2009

    Well written.

    Inna

  • George W Whitehead on Jul 11, 2009

    Nice one, Rizz.

  • Deep Blue on Jul 11, 2009

    Another well written piece.

  • CA Johnson on Jul 11, 2009

    This is a great poem, rizzei. I enjoyed reading it as usual.

  • rizzei on Jul 11, 2009

    i wrote this having my friend’s point of view..:)

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 12, 2009

    This is oh so lovely and touching. I love the loving care of your words.

  • Melody SJAL on Jul 13, 2009

    Very sweet and touching.

  • larry on Jul 13, 2009

    you got the emotion flowing in your poem

  • Fresh Writing on Jul 13, 2009

    Although I didn\’t read those books, what you\’ve written here is an excellent poem. As larry said, \”you got the emotion flowing in your poem\”- especially in your last few lines.

    Excellent work,

    -Fresh Writing

  • clay hurtubise on Jul 13, 2009

    Sweet piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Anne McNew on Jul 13, 2009

    this is very well written riz,
    keep posting

  • fragile18 on Jul 14, 2009

    WOW! love twilight saga!

    hahaha.

    -i wrote this having my friend’s point of view..:)– i know who. she-who-must-not-be-named. haha

  • Francois Hagnere on Jul 15, 2009

    Truly beautiful and so well-written.
    Thank you, Best wishes,
    François

  • lh on Jul 15, 2009

    for those who must know how lovely ur i repost this here again ur a star

    ur amazing
    ur so nice
    of human goodness
    there is no price
    where ever u may be
    let photogrophy be
    ur lovely take
    and out of u
    a lovely photographer make

    ur too good
    ur profile is cute

    with your camera

    can you me shoot???????????????????

  • trisha on Jul 19, 2009

    lovely.. nice dedication

  • bearhugs on Jul 23, 2009

    This is very sweet.

  • Sonia Doreen on Jul 27, 2009

    How true, Absence does make the heart grow fonder!

  • CutestPrincess on Aug 1, 2009

    a well written piece with great delivery,

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