Long Distance

rizzei on Jul 11, 2009

Tags: airport, distance, Edward, love, SMS

Eclipse is the 3rd series in Twilight Saga:)

Everyday is perfect for the two of us
We walk together like it was our last
Even how busy she really was

She sends me sweet messages
I do the same to her before I rest
And our sleeps will be at their best

But now that I’m in a far away land
Time with her absence is hard to spend
This sadness I feel is hard to mend

It’s Edward in Eclipse, I just wish she knew
“I’ll be back so soon, you won’t have time to miss me.
Look after my heart – I’ve left it with you.”

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Darla Cooke on Jul 11, 2009
Very nice!
Pinaki Ghosh on Jul 11, 2009
Nice poem
Inna Tysoe on Jul 11, 2009
Well written.

Inna
George W Whitehead on Jul 11, 2009
Nice one, Rizz.
Deep Blue on Jul 11, 2009
Another well written piece.
CA Johnson on Jul 11, 2009
This is a great poem, rizzei. I enjoyed reading it as usual.
rizzei on Jul 11, 2009
i wrote this having my friend’s point of view..:)
Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 12, 2009
This is oh so lovely and touching. I love the loving care of your words.
Melody SJAL on Jul 13, 2009
Very sweet and touching.
larry on Jul 13, 2009
you got the emotion flowing in your poem
Fresh Writing on Jul 13, 2009
Although I didn\’t read those books, what you\’ve written here is an excellent poem. As larry said, \”you got the emotion flowing in your poem\”- especially in your last few lines.

Excellent work,

-Fresh Writing
clay hurtubise on Jul 13, 2009
Sweet piece.
Thanks,
Clay
Anne McNew on Jul 13, 2009
this is very well written riz,
keep posting
fragile18 on Jul 14, 2009
WOW! love twilight saga!

hahaha.

-i wrote this having my friend’s point of view..:)– i know who. she-who-must-not-be-named. haha
Francois Hagnere on Jul 15, 2009
Truly beautiful and so well-written.
Thank you, Best wishes,
François
lh on Jul 15, 2009
for those who must know how lovely ur i repost this here again ur a star

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of human goodness
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where ever u may be
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trisha on Jul 19, 2009
lovely.. nice dedication
bearhugs on Jul 23, 2009
This is very sweet.
Sonia Doreen on Jul 27, 2009
How true, Absence does make the heart grow fonder!
CutestPrincess on Aug 1, 2009
a well written piece with great delivery,

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