Longing

Dewan Golam Shafi Choudhury on Dec 6, 2008

About someone who had deceived me and now I long for those moments which we had shared. We were great friends. But this is not what I deserve.

I sat in the dark thinking with no light.
She disappeared from my life while
I was spraying around the world with happiness.
Those childhood moments I long for, do haunt me now.
It attacks my mind and weakens my surviving heart.
Our friendship had ended due to her evilness.
I did nothing wrong.
So this injustice I have received, I do not deserve.

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psychobutterfly on Dec 6, 2008
nice very intense:)
Darlene McFarlane on Dec 6, 2008
Betrayal of a long time friend is so very sad and something that stays with us for a long time.

You did a wonderful job with this one, Shafi.
Eric Mendoza on Dec 6, 2008
Great emotion within these lines. It kills me to think of some peoples selfishness.
Joie Schmidt on Dec 6, 2008
I’m so sorry for your painful experience, you\’ve conveyed it well in your poem.

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
eddiego65 on Dec 7, 2008
It really hurts to be betrayed by a friend. You conveyed your emotion so clearly. Great poem!
Kim Buck on Dec 7, 2008
“A person who has lost one friend has lost too many”.

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