Human beings are born out of love. All of us wanted to be loved and to belong, even the dogs and other animals needed it. We long, grave and we share.

Warm glow of moonlight

Illuminates my longing

Thirsty of love.

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  • Vinaya says good bye on Jan 7, 2012

    Your love for life intoxicates me

  • AmosTheCat on Jan 7, 2012

    Your second line is particularly poignant. I could see this poem with the second and third lines switched. It is beautiful.

  • vijayanths on Jan 7, 2012

    Powerful lines.

  • MJRapp on Jan 7, 2012

    Very good. Liked the picture too. :-)

  • aheed411 on Jan 8, 2012

    Good

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 8, 2012

    I think you got it :)

  • iva75cpb on Jan 8, 2012

    Beautiful, again.

  • ittech on Jan 8, 2012

    enthusiastic feeling of moonlight

    Illuminates my longing

    Thirsty of love life.

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