Philly Dreamer is challenging the poets of Triond yet again. I only hope I can compete with all the great talent out there.

Longing

Of touches

Soft

Causes

Soft

Touches of

Longing

Check out Philly Dreamer’s new poetry challenge at:  Poetry Challenge: Reflections in The Mirror

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  • Nidhi Rai on Jan 29, 2012

    All the best for challenge.

  • avissado on Jan 29, 2012

    lovely

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 29, 2012

    Thank you Nidhi and avissado, God Bless!

  • ImKarn23 on Jan 29, 2012

    talented girl!

  • HannanRKhan on Jan 29, 2012

    Beautiful!

  • FX777222999 on Jan 29, 2012

    Lovely lines of poetry.

  • xphantoms on Jan 29, 2012

    nice

  • sheilanewton on Jan 29, 2012

    Wow – I’m going to have to make an effort to fulfil philly’s challenge too!

  • V rank on Jan 29, 2012

    A little sensuous yet pleasing…

  • dwisuka on Jan 29, 2012

    nice one

  • tr10nd3rs on Jan 29, 2012

    beautiful.. nice one

  • girishpuri on Jan 29, 2012

    i like it

  • bryan21764 on Jan 30, 2012

    Great one. I liked it.

    Bryan

  • lucia anna on Jan 30, 2012

    Great share

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 30, 2012

    very good

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 30, 2012

    Thank you so much for all the reads, likes and comments. God Bless!

  • iTrMandar on Jan 31, 2012

    Beautiful!

  • Margaret Boseroy on Jan 31, 2012

    Again, very nice!

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 31, 2012

    Thank you iTrMandar and Margaret Boseroy for reading and commenting. God Bless!

  • lyan08 on Feb 1, 2012

    nice share..

  • marqjonz on Feb 1, 2012

    Very good.

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 1, 2012

    Thank you lyan08, God Bless!

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 1, 2012

    Beautiful.

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 1, 2012

    Thank you Melody SJAL. God Bless!

  • Adam Henry Sears on Feb 3, 2012

    Well, this was alright, but it could have been a little more involved. lol… Thanks for sharing.

  • Kristie Claar on Feb 4, 2012

    Thanks for reading and commenting Adam Henry Sears. I’m sure it could have been more involved but it is what it is. It’s a form of poetry I was just introduced to. I’m sure in time I could produce better work.

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