A view of ourselves in a mirror reveals a mixed bag of good and evil. There are moments of joy and times of sorrow but what is conveyed is the tale that we must keep trying to do better at all times.

Look at us

Tell me what you see

I see your reflection

In a mirror

- – -

I not only notice

A face that’s grimacing in pain

But a face that’s painted

In a variety of colors

- – -

I see lipstick

Rouge upon your cheeks

Trembling lips

And nervous hands

Trying to hold a cup of coffee

- – -

A mirror does not lie

It shows the latest news

Of wars and rumors of war

Death, bombings and limbs

Lost on the battlefield

- – -

Some pictures are 

Not always depressing

At times there are victories 

And triumphs

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About which we are proud

- – -

We laugh and cry

Lifting up our voices to the heavens

And giving thanks

For all the good things

That have been bestowed upon us

- – -

All in all

We view a mixed bag

One that’s neither here nor there

But inviting us

To try to do better next time

- – -

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  • Angelji on Jan 8, 2012

    so beautiful poem..there is always a chance to do better ..

  • pattiann on Jan 8, 2012

    Super, excellent. Great, fantastic. I will tell you a secret that I am your biggest fan. I know on my other comment that I put steel for still. I know my mistake, my keyboard is on a device like an iphone without the phone and it has a mind of its own. Smile.

  • prsol46 on Jan 8, 2012

    That’s very nice work!

  • mayka on Jan 8, 2012

    Beautiful poem.

  • LadyElena on Jan 8, 2012

    Lovely Poem. Thanks.

  • yes me on Jan 8, 2012

    Like this too Erwin your on a roll cheers

  • aheed411 on Jan 9, 2012

    Terrible

  • ittech on Jan 9, 2012

    Beautiful thoughts.

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