Look Into My Eyes and then say whayt you want to.

Without this snap I would never be called a poet ever
Look Into My Eyes

 

Once you enter

Through my eyes

You will be trapped.

 

None can help you leave

As my eyes are

A thing of joy for ever

For one to perceive

 

My eyes are yours,

Cynosure of your eyes

I mean, I am, how any one can

From my eyes ever leave?

 

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  • ssaunders on Dec 1, 2009

    This was a good poem LH I liked it.

  • dgraphicrookie on Dec 1, 2009

    nice poem. I like it.

  • wonder on Dec 1, 2009

    A nice poem.

  • abhishek40914 on Dec 1, 2009

    nice poem!

  • Hugo La Rosa on Dec 1, 2009

    Great poem!!!

  • Judi Eddy on Dec 1, 2009

    Lovely poem. I have got pale green eyes, just like a cat, my favourite animal. Judi x

  • Darla Smith on Dec 1, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Svetlana Cherevik on Dec 1, 2009

    a nice piece

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