They think making love to the moon is not luny enough .They are simply pracitising I suppose.


Loony  lovers

 

 

Lovely again

There was some one

From the Mirage

By the moon

And made a lunatic jump

Over it thinking

It was she

Here you are again happy

In the lunacy

Of being so romantic

In love

Still the same

Thank God both of you

Are over the moon,

That’s all

What’s loves game?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Stan Wilson on Dec 25, 2009

    love and the moon go together huh…very good poem

  • Teves on Dec 25, 2009

    Nice one and hot photo…

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 26, 2009

    I guess some of us do get a little moon eyed!

  • wonder on Dec 26, 2009

    Very nice; even the photos are captivating.

  • seksijerk on Dec 26, 2009

    love is lunatic

  • drelayaraja on Dec 26, 2009

    Great one on love :)

  • Olivia Van Logum on Dec 26, 2009

    Are you in cahoots with Ken Bultman? We have a bit of a poetry “moon” theme going this week!

    Great poem x

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 26, 2009

    Interesting poem.

  • Steven West on Dec 26, 2009

    You played a cute tune about love and the moon.

  • fashion girl on Dec 26, 2009

    Loves Game is a great song that can be summed up in the 1st words LadyGaga repeats, “Let’s have some fun this beat is sick, I wanna take a ride on your disco.”

  • ssaunders on Dec 29, 2009

    They say that the moon ties to our emotions in a sensational way so this poem fits, nice one.

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