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Losing a Friend Like You

jaysonv on Dec 14, 2009
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A poem about friendship which measured by heart not in miles.

Losing a friend like you,
A thing I hate to do,
The feeling of emptiness,
Exceeds over happiness,

It’s hard to forget,
The friendship we’ve never regret,
The time we’ve shared together,
The laughter I’ll treasure forever

Now you’re gone,
What have I done?
How I wish I could turn back time
And savor them like an aged wine.

What must I do?
To make things undo,
And make you come back to me,
A friend dear for me.

- Roseller S. Fiel II

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  • LovelyWolf on Dec 14, 2009

    time heals all wounds, great poem!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 14, 2009

    I lose a friend or two every day
    But no matter what I do
    Friends just shy away
    So have acquaintances that’s the only way friends often do and betray

    And with your love they run away
    No matter what I do
    I lose friends every day
    Hope I don’t lose you some day

  • LoveDoctor on Dec 14, 2009

    Very sentimental poem. I had a friend for a few years and then we decided to turn our friendship into something more and then I lost him both as a friend and partner. It can be painful. But time heals all wounds they say. A great learning experience.

  • Unofre Pili on Dec 14, 2009

    True friends are hard to find, indeed. Lovely piece

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 14, 2009

    A poem that I can really relate to.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 14, 2009

    Great poem….how is your friend lost? Is it through death or distance?

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 14, 2009

    Very good

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Dec 14, 2009

    Very nice. :)

  • deklin42 on Dec 14, 2009

    I enjoyed this poem very much. Thank you.

  • Will Dee on Dec 14, 2009

    Nice poem thanks for sharing.

  • Citra Florenca on Dec 14, 2009

    Touchy poems!

  • Westbrook on Dec 14, 2009

    I can relate to this poem. There are so many things that can go wrong in a relationship. The problem is you often never know what it was that caused the problem.

  • rizzei on Dec 15, 2009

    a very nice tribute to a friend..really a heartfelt one..good job! :)

  • K.Reshma on Dec 15, 2009

    Great poem

  • jaysonv on Dec 15, 2009

    ohhhh..thank you so much guys..

  • ladydryle on Dec 15, 2009

    great post…keep it up!

  • Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. on Dec 15, 2009

    a very nostalgic poem…

  • Teves on Dec 16, 2009

    Nice written…

  • jaysonv on Dec 16, 2009

    Thank you Lorenzo and Teves..

  • Frances Lawrence on Dec 16, 2009

    Very good poem, I can relate to the feelings expressed

  • PhoenixRox on Dec 16, 2009

    I can understand these feelings. Time is the best healer.

  • jaysonv on Dec 18, 2009

    Thank you for ur compliments PhoenixRox and Frances..

  • ladydryle on Dec 20, 2009

    friends will always be cherished…

  • George Mendoza on Dec 21, 2009

    nice poem.. i really like it. Thanks to you.

  • jaysonv on Dec 22, 2009

    Thank you George.

  • Marcuz Best on Dec 24, 2009

    Nice poem..

  • jaysonv on Dec 26, 2009

    thanks marcuz..

  • jaysonv on Dec 28, 2009

    keep on publishing interesting articles guys! Thanks.. Happy New Year!

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Dec 29, 2009

    The beauty of losing a good friend is the empathy gained to know what a good friend is….and how to become one.

  • coolbryan on Dec 30, 2009

    very impressive post..

  • jaysonv on Dec 30, 2009

    thanks for all your wonderful feedback guys..

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