Very well-written, Kim. Nice piece.

an excellent piece from you again!

A lot of emotion here!

I liked this , it showed lots of emotion and feeling.

I CAN FEEL YOU LETTING OUT ON THIS. DO YOU LISTEN TO MUSIC WHEN YOU WRITE?

A lot of unanswered questions you’re asking yourself in this write. Hope you find all the right answers when the smoke clears. Well written piece.

good piece lets everyone draw there own conclusion

emotional and really pulls you in to share the hurt.. nice work

Sweet and sour mixture of relationships. Very good.

beautifully written and your thoughts are well conveyed.

grab hold of your sanity, do not let it slip away forever. stay strong and try to answer all those questions.

I can feel the frustration in this piece. Sanity can slip away if we are careful to take care of ourselves.

Sounds like an ending relationship. Hopefully, there won’t be any bitterness (las line)

you always share the pest pieces,thanks

take care of yourself-always.

while waiting on the bitterness, go find happiness….that is what i would want someone to tell me anyways…thank you for your emotions…

Heavy emotions Kim…hope everything’s okay.

Hello Kim,

I have to say, the line of comments goes a long way, but with good reason. Excellent writing; a pleasure to read.

See you around!

-Fresh Writing

unsettled
questions
fears

DON’T EVER FEEL BITTER, IF YOU TURN BITTER THEN THAT PERSON WINS. THEY GET WHAT THEY WANTED ALL ALONG. TO SHATTER A PERSON WHO HAS HOPE IN THEIR HEART TO FIND LOVE AND TO SHARE THEIR LIFE WITH A SPECIAL PERSON

Hey you are always your own best friend. Love Yourself first.