Where are we?

Color me vivid, 

Color me vague,

Give me your soul,

Give me the plague.

Render me broken,

Tender my kiss,

Shatter my heart,

Live in my bliss.

Explore my body,

Employ my love,

Beckon the birth,

Destroy the dove.

Spend the daylight,

Save the cash,

Burn the darkness,

Blow the ash.

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  • papaleng on Nov 3, 2009

    nicely written.

  • Will Gray on Nov 3, 2009

    Excellent write!!

  • STEVE666 on Nov 4, 2009

    Simple but very effective verse—beautifully written.

  • Rod Ferrandino on Nov 12, 2009

    terse, tight, very good write.

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