I can feel the isolation in this poem, I have days like this … great poem.

Great poem, I know exactly how it feels just to want to lock yourself in a dark room and hide away from everything. good work

I can really relate to this poem. I’ve felt lost lots of times and just wanted to go off and hide.

Excellent poem. I think we have all felt like this at one time or another. We all go thru our ups and downs in life and sometimes we want to just run and hide.

Incredible! I will so stumble this when I get back to my own CPU…

This is an excellent poem,
Very well written,
I can feel the lost feeling in here,
nicely done

You truly have a unique gift for the written word – - you work makes me sit up and give my complete attention to it – - it is wonderful*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.

Very very good – real understanding of your subject

Been there – don’t mind it actually. A Pleasure to read.

Great piece Steve! It evokes pathos and emotions in me because I could instantly connect to the underlying theme. Very well written!

-manya

A very intriguing work. I like the atmosphere and the metaphors, and I adore rhyme, so it was nice to see a poem written in a more classical style, with rhyme and the leit-motive repeated as the final verse. Very nice style and quite elegant. The last stanza is my favourite, I see it as both general and personal and it creates a strong ending. Congrats!

Very dark Steve, Great work though. Coombsy

I think we all feel like being lost at one time or another…great write

Excellant!

Well said, I think we all feel lost at times but another day and the clouds blow away and the sun shines.Life is full of such experiences.

very well said.
great presentation

Great piece, I really love it!

Wonderful Poem, You feel the Isolation as you read. an admirable work. I am Impressed by your talent.

nice work

MrSteve666,

I sure like your poetry. It has the rhythms ‘n’ rhymes and the themes I like, so why don’t you join our little club?

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I have days like this but they make me feel like I am going insane and don’t know which direction to turn to!!! This is another enjoyable read I really like your work and can’t wait until I get ahold of the next article!!!

Can relate to this piece for about a year after my broken engagement. Nothing I did or felt was right and i felt incredibly lost. But lucky for me,I found a light and life went on. A wonderful piece to read and it deals with reality of life to me.

This is a perfect and true poem. The rhythms are so on and tight ….flows just perfectly. Great prose here Steve. Top shelf!

S**t I think I am going through that now. Very well presented poem and it is touching so many nerves.

This is awesome mate. Great rhythm, and the chosen language is just spot on. Gets even better with further readings too.

From the age of 17 up until the age of 30..this piece pretty much described my disposition. Then I got my head out of the clouds and planted my feet firmly on the ground Excellent piece Steve