A poem about becoming mentally detached from just about everything—pulling up the draw-bridges and perfectly isolating yourself.

The night falls like a stone

Casting shadows on the pathway home

Only my footsteps break the still of night

In darkness without a guiding light

One step nearer but no where bound

When you’re lost—-not wanting to be found

                    *****

A distant imagery I can see

Like a reflection of all that was me

I courted danger like a thief

Turning my back on what once was belief

Just another stranger in another town

When you’re lost—-not wanting to be found

                     *****

If life was so black or white

Like the childhood innocence of wrong or right

From that strait line I’ve often strayed

In the wind of time I’ve bowed and swayed

Watching the world spinning around

When you’re lost—-not wanting to be found

                     *****

North or south or east or west

Each lost to our own wilderness

So well trodden is the path we go

Each one reaping what we sow

The seed that fell on stony ground

When you’re lost—-not wanting to be found

                     *****

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  • Kate Smedley on Apr 23, 2009

    I can feel the isolation in this poem, I have days like this … great poem.

  • ashleycollier on Apr 23, 2009

    Great poem, I know exactly how it feels just to want to lock yourself in a dark room and hide away from everything. good work

  • Darla Smith on Apr 23, 2009

    I can really relate to this poem. I’ve felt lost lots of times and just wanted to go off and hide.

  • Mrs M on Apr 23, 2009

    Excellent poem. I think we have all felt like this at one time or another. We all go thru our ups and downs in life and sometimes we want to just run and hide.

  • HatedNation on Apr 23, 2009

    Incredible! I will so stumble this when I get back to my own CPU…

  • Poetic Enigma on Apr 23, 2009

    This is an excellent poem,
    Very well written,
    I can feel the lost feeling in here,
    nicely done

  • Liane Schmidt on Apr 24, 2009

    You truly have a unique gift for the written word – - you work makes me sit up and give my complete attention to it – - it is wonderful*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Evelyn Moore on Apr 24, 2009

    Very very good – real understanding of your subject

  • Duff D Moss on Apr 24, 2009

    Been there – don’t mind it actually. A Pleasure to read.

  • manya on Apr 24, 2009

    Great piece Steve! It evokes pathos and emotions in me because I could instantly connect to the underlying theme. Very well written!

    -manya

  • laviskrg on Apr 26, 2009

    A very intriguing work. I like the atmosphere and the metaphors, and I adore rhyme, so it was nice to see a poem written in a more classical style, with rhyme and the leit-motive repeated as the final verse. Very nice style and quite elegant. The last stanza is my favourite, I see it as both general and personal and it creates a strong ending. Congrats!

  • Stephen Coombs on Apr 26, 2009

    Very dark Steve, Great work though. Coombsy

  • Sheila M on Apr 27, 2009

    I think we all feel like being lost at one time or another…great write

  • Holiday5 on Apr 28, 2009

    Excellant!

  • Ruby Hawk on Apr 29, 2009

    Well said, I think we all feel lost at times but another day and the clouds blow away and the sun shines.Life is full of such experiences.

  • Anne McNew on May 3, 2009

    very well said.
    great presentation

  • marisolflamenco on May 5, 2009

    Great piece, I really love it!

  • Jamie Myles on Jul 12, 2009

    Wonderful Poem, You feel the Isolation as you read. an admirable work. I am Impressed by your talent.

  • mishee on Jul 21, 2009

    nice work :)

  • Chris Marlowe II on Aug 19, 2009

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    I sure like your poetry. It has the rhythms ‘n’ rhymes and the themes I like, so why don’t you join our little club?

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  • alc on Aug 20, 2009

    I have days like this but they make me feel like I am going insane and don’t know which direction to turn to!!! This is another enjoyable read I really like your work and can’t wait until I get ahold of the next article!!!

  • Payge on Sep 2, 2009

    Can relate to this piece for about a year after my broken engagement. Nothing I did or felt was right and i felt incredibly lost. But lucky for me,I found a light and life went on. A wonderful piece to read and it deals with reality of life to me.

  • Sterling Christianson on Sep 14, 2009

    This is a perfect and true poem. The rhythms are so on and tight ….flows just perfectly. Great prose here Steve. Top shelf!

  • lillyrose on Oct 28, 2009

    S**t I think I am going through that now. Very well presented poem and it is touching so many nerves.

  • Lostash on Nov 2, 2009

    This is awesome mate. Great rhythm, and the chosen language is just spot on. Gets even better with further readings too.

  • Elleword on Dec 19, 2009

    From the age of 17 up until the age of 30..this piece pretty much described my disposition. Then I got my head out of the clouds and planted my feet firmly on the ground :-) Excellent piece Steve :-)

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