Lost Explorers

Darla Cooke on Oct 28, 2008

Tags: attacked, bitten, dark, eerie, exploring, forest, friends, halloween, lost, night, vampires

Being lost in the forest on Halloween night would be a terrifying experience.

A small group of exploring friends,
became lost deep in the eerie forest.
Their fear rapidly increased to terror,
on that frightfully scary Halloween night.
As they plodded through the dark forest,
the night creatures drew closer and closer.
Within moments the terrified explorers,
found themselves being attacked,
and bitten by evil, hungry vampires.

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mdegenhardt on Oct 28, 2008
This reads like an excerpt from a bigger story. You should try to continue this piece. Michael
goodselfme on Oct 28, 2008
It really gives an eary feeling.
Darlene McFarlane on Oct 28, 2008
Like mdegenhardt said, this gives the feel of a bigger story. It would be a great read!
Melody SJAL on Oct 28, 2008
This is a lovely Halloween poem, Darla.
johnny yuma on Nov 1, 2008
Darla,
This is a great piece. Like Darlene said it could easily be made into a longer piece. On the other hand it works well by itself too.
Wonderful job my friend.
Damon

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