Lost in the Dark Forest

Darla Cooke on Apr 14, 2009

Frightened and alone.

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Lost in the dark forest,

Overwhelmed by fright.

Scared of the eerie sounds.

Terrified for my life.

I feel I am being stalked.

Nowhere for me to hide.

Trapped within this forest.

Horror is surrounding me.

Evil creatures are nearby.

Darkness engulfs the forest.

All alone and frightened.

Real terror I am feeling.

Knowing I am in danger.

Fearful of never escaping.

Overcome with pure terror.

Roaming around in circles.

Everywhere there are monsters.

Searching for a way out.

Trying to escape this nightmare.

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Comments (11)

Daghost413860 on Apr 14, 2009
but monsters are fun!!
mmblxbx on Apr 14, 2009
Very good
rajeev bhargava on Apr 14, 2009
i really like this poem. it is full of suspense from start to end. there is an anticipation of finding a way out the forest. there is also tension that there are monsters dwelling inside it and no way out! BRILLIANT!!
Juhls on Apr 14, 2009
Oh wow! Very scary piece, Darla. But well-written : ).
STEVE666 on Apr 14, 2009
Very scary, Darla.
Mrs M on Apr 14, 2009
This is why I never go into the forest!!
Evelyn Moore on Apr 14, 2009
great but frightening
maranatha on Apr 14, 2009
Well written! I really liked the way the suspense builds with each stanza. Adding a line to each stanza helped build it as well. Creative!
Yovita Siswati on Apr 15, 2009
you make me scare too. very well written.
Kate Smedley on Apr 15, 2009
Like the picture to the poem and love the poem!
LOVELYHONEY on Apr 15, 2009
back to square one,
where u begun ,
with negative thought again,
in that negativity,
comfort u’ve sought..

how can i help pl say ,
i am sad at this same old way.

Hi there!