A feeling of suffocation.

My soul wanders through my immobile body,
Searching for joy or even a smile,
Some things about me just seem so vile (to me!).
My head is aching.my hands are shaking,
Not knowing what to do with the day is quite frustrating.
People say I’m weird,others say strange,
Quite recently I’ve heard that I’m deranged!
My tears are held back,for fear of upsetting another.
Call me brave or call me a freak,
Just don’t ever tell me that I’m weak.

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  • Darla Smith on Jan 29, 2009

    A very emotional poem.

  • Likha on Jan 29, 2009

    You have the potential Vonkiernan. Keep on writing more!

  • LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Nov 21, 2009

    people can be so cruel and judgmental. ignore those who dare to say you are weird. you are a very beautiful girl.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 22, 2009

    Hardly weak when you write like that. A yes, that talent will always
    make you different from those who lack it or cannot express emotion
    as well as you.

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