A lover is lost.

Lost in a dream which was made just for me
One scented flower captivates my heart
Veiled only in the softest melody
Each ember waits for destiny to start
Lost in a wish an angel left behind
Outside the need of what they say is real
Vast as the heavens which the stars designed
Enduring kiss must venture what I feel
Lost in a whirl and lost for evermore
On this one wish my flowered dream to hold
Visions set into moonbeams then will sore
Eternally our love will be retold
Lost in a single minded point of view
Lost in this thought this feeling over you

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  • stevetheblogger on Sep 8, 2012

    Wonderful piece I enjoyed the read
    Best Wishes

  • jennyreeve on Sep 8, 2012

    Beautiful. Well written.

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Sep 8, 2012

    well written,shared on fcbook

  • Kharla Jolly on Sep 8, 2012

    Sometimes the heart sees what the eyes can\’t, what a true statement. This one pulled me in, with every single word. Eternal love? Yup, I do believe in it, thanks for sharing another masterpiece. Good job, Martin Kloess

  • misterdd on Sep 8, 2012

    Very nice work. I like

  • streakanime on Sep 8, 2012

    This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. :)

  • lovebytes on Sep 8, 2012

    the eyes will eventually catch up to the heart. nice work

  • marqjonz on Sep 8, 2012

    Excellent sonnet.

  • smokychristine on Sep 8, 2012

    Lots of feeling here. Good poem.

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