Comments on: Love

By: Melody Arcamo Lagrimas

Melody Arcamo Lagrimas — Thu, 03 Sep 2009 04:54:06 +0000

So beautiful and sweet.

By: MMV Abad

MMV Abad — Wed, 02 Sep 2009 23:57:39 +0000

very nice

By: elizabeth Abbott

elizabeth Abbott — Wed, 02 Sep 2009 22:38:15 +0000

I got into this poem. That one little glitch can be fixed, Lots of feelings here.

By: Juancav

Juancav — Thu, 14 May 2009 20:29:39 +0000

Nice poem.

By: Lauren Axelrod

Lauren Axelrod — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 04:11:50 +0000

Keep plugging. A great start. Art is not called art until we say it’s so.

By: Teresa Cuervo

Teresa Cuervo — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 02:43:24 +0000

Nice poem!

By: Rosemary

Rosemary — Fri, 03 Oct 2008 03:18:14 +0000

Love it. Your first sight at this person is intense, feeling the love growing and the death as something in least of your ideals. This poem is amazingly beautiful.

By: KathySpring

KathySpring — Thu, 13 Mar 2008 23:39:33 +0000

I loved it,
what some people said above is wrong, when people start rewriting and rewriting a poem to make it \\\”perfect\\\” they do just that they take away the charm of it the specialness about. This is straight from the heart. great job
KathySpring

By: Wordsword

Wordsword — Thu, 17 Jan 2008 19:54:57 +0000

Hannah said this: I think this is pretty good. However, I don't like the second part.
Also - you referred to her as "you" in the first part but "her" in the second part. it threw me off a little.

This is my take on it:
When the voices came in, it was because the speaker had surrendered to those voices and they are now the ones speaking through the writer and they will always speak in the third person because they are the third party.
The writer himself felt love, but the voices or demons which he inclined his ear to spoke death. Demons always come to kill, steal and destroy.
What we listen to will eventually overtake us.

By: Marcus Edward John Cross

Marcus Edward John Cross — Sat, 12 Jan 2008 09:16:05 +0000

A short but touching poem.